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		<title>By: Tania Mara</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tania Mara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Oct 2009 14:24:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just a remark about turning a Web article into an article series: some blog owners don&#039;t like it. I used to deal with clients who loved blog post series, so I got really surprised when I stumbled upon a customer who had a negative opinion on them and asked me to shorten the series I was working on. 

Make sure your client and you are on the same page when it comes to multiple posts on the same topic, even if said client claims you&#039;re free to write anything you want as long as it fits the blog&#039;s topic. You may find out you aren&#039;t really as free as he had told you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just a remark about turning a Web article into an article series: some blog owners don&#8217;t like it. I used to deal with clients who loved blog post series, so I got really surprised when I stumbled upon a customer who had a negative opinion on them and asked me to shorten the series I was working on. </p>
<p>Make sure your client and you are on the same page when it comes to multiple posts on the same topic, even if said client claims you&#8217;re free to write anything you want as long as it fits the blog&#8217;s topic. You may find out you aren&#8217;t really as free as he had told you.</p>
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		<title>By: Terreece Clarke</title>
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		<dc:creator>Terreece Clarke</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Oct 2009 14:07:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Dawn!

Great tip on the passive voice. I&#039;m thinking that might be a good post to hit up later, thanks for the idea! 

I count girdles along with shapewear and control top pantyhose :0) And as many ads as I see for them, yep folks are still wearing them. Who am I kidding? I own several configurations of shapewear</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Dawn!</p>
<p>Great tip on the passive voice. I&#8217;m thinking that might be a good post to hit up later, thanks for the idea! </p>
<p>I count girdles along with shapewear and control top pantyhose :0) And as many ads as I see for them, yep folks are still wearing them. Who am I kidding? I own several configurations of shapewear</p>
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		<title>By: Dawn Allcot</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dawn Allcot</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 17:45:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Females, too -- interesting analogy! Does anyone wear girdles anymore?

Love this article and am linking some of my writing students  to it. Great tips! 

I&#039;d like to add that passive voice and passive verbs (using is and was rather than more &quot;active&quot; verbs) also lengthens writing. Re-phrasing to more active verbs not only makes the work read &quot;faster,&quot; it often takes out extra words. 

I often recommend Ken Rand&#039;s 10 % Solution as a great way to cut excess words. &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0966818407?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=wwwallcotmedi-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0966818407&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;The 10% Solution&lt;/a&gt;

Love your title, by the way. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Females, too &#8212; interesting analogy! Does anyone wear girdles anymore?</p>
<p>Love this article and am linking some of my writing students  to it. Great tips! </p>
<p>I&#8217;d like to add that passive voice and passive verbs (using is and was rather than more &#8220;active&#8221; verbs) also lengthens writing. Re-phrasing to more active verbs not only makes the work read &#8220;faster,&#8221; it often takes out extra words. </p>
<p>I often recommend Ken Rand&#8217;s 10 % Solution as a great way to cut excess words. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0966818407?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=wwwallcotmedi-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0966818407" rel="nofollow">The 10% Solution</a></p>
<p>Love your title, by the way. <img src='http://freelancewritinggigs.com/articlewriting/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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